...for you, it is only the beggining. Such dedication, especially for your very first animation, is something I truly admire. You can only improve from this point on... unless your life hits the dumps, but lets hope that doesn't happen.

I must say that the final product was worthy of praise. What caught my eye the most was the amazing art style, really it was the best. Your animation had some tiny nitpickings, but mostly, it was very good. The only things that may throw the whole thing off were some sounds, since that seemed just a bit off synch.

Haha, Halloween... My, I haven't had a true Halloween in ages, the Halloween spirit is dead in my country when you compare it to other countries. Anywho, it's late by a whole day, but have a late nice Halloween wish.

It's actually better than a lot of the other begginer submissions. Now, perhaps you may not be a begginer now, but it still felt lacking in coeherence, as if the events happening were a little disjointed.

Also, your English is acceptable, but there are several spelling mistakes, such as a tense problem when Metal Sonic spoke. These mistakes all took place in your English. Your translations are also a little too literal, for example:

"Tú no me asustas... Encima, eres un clon pésimo"
"You do not scare me... You are a clone over bad"

First and foremost, you lacked punctuations to finish both sentences. Second, "You do not scare me..." is correct, but "You are a clone over bad" is wrong; instead, it should be along the lines of "You are a faulty clone", or "You are a pathetic clone".

Regardless of spelling mistakes, it was passable. However, I would suggest that you make separate implementations of lenguages; as in, let the viewer choose to watch the movie in Spanish or in English; piling up both lenguages in a single box is unnecesary, akward and is just not done.

I'm posting this review in English, so you can try to work on your own a little more. Don't worry, it's not that hard; after all, I, too, am a native speaker of Spanish. Perhaps more reading material in English may help you expand your knowledge.

Good luck.

Amazing. Simply amazing. These type of games are usually all really crafty, and the feeling, the atmosphere, everything was simply amazing.

Man, for a a few seconds there, my heart actually began to pump a little faster! That's quite the feat, cause I feel aboslutely no fear whatsoever; try having your amygdalae removed.

I'll try the 2nd one soon. This is definitely a great game. Shortness is it's only drawback.

...Yeah, I do think I can.

Quite interesting, I prefer this version a lot more over the original composition presented in Ruby/Saphire/Emerald, although the wind sound at the end was plain weird. It was the only section I felt ruined this piece from being perfect.

It also managed to inspire some memories of me when I had my Ruby, which I lost thanks to a damn hole in my pocket when I was out with my parents, and of my Emerald, which was stolen by a classmate I used to call friend and to this day, the cheeky bastard still has the nerve to say that he'll return it someday...

Anyways, pretty nice work.

...VERY nice memories. I'll be DAMNED if "The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya" wasn't one of the best anime I've ever seen. Though I'm curious as to WHY the "64 style" of sound, it was carried out effectively and with icreadible results.

Hare Hare Yukai IS amazing; it wouldn't have warranted that massive influx of fans replicating it over at Japan if it wasn't. I'm also curious, if you have any plans to do the same wih "Boken Desho Desho?" (opening theme), or "God Knows..." or "Lost My Music"?

Oh wait, I'm not really sure if C64 style would be able to simulate the crazy solo section of "Lost My Music"...

Anyway, this is some very good work. The fact that it's one of the few, truy GOOD works that reference or ARE, about TMOHS, also helped it. Keep at it.